RoxanneR

I am always inspired by the places that I live, or have lived in, especially when I go to Cornwall and there are all the cute little seaside cottages that ...

I really hate editing my work, because there's no fun in it! Anyone else feel the same way? RR*

I have my own 'writing rules' and I always stick to them. I find it is a whole lot easier if you write all the rules in the front of ...

I like writing in the first person, because I can portray emotion well. Although I don't do it all the time, I still like it. RR*

In britain these: ( ) are brackets, as are these: [ ]. RR*

That sounds good; I can never think up character names. I have a load of names, but none of them fit with the character I am writing about. RR*

I did this once before, but the story was really rubbish, because I had developed characters and a plot, I kept wanting to describe the characters, but you would do ...

That was very funny! Just like me when I got my first detention! RR*

Very, VERY odd! But funny, and the YouTube was a bit of light relief from my homework. Thanks! RR*

I like all the description that you put in this poem, but I feel like Jack too. It's wierd! Does any more of your own writing make you feel like ...

Yeh, you definitly need to add more for people to give you more constructive criticism. But it sounds good for a begining. RR*

The woman's character and the other main boy (who hasn't yet been introduced) are both based on us, but it has been hard to add more charactoristics so that they ...

I agree with in_too_deep. Sometimes, there is just too many 'maybes' in the last paragraph, but you could work on that. I was just like this when I went out ...

This poem has a heartful meaning, but I don't think you expressed it in a way that really suits the purpose. I love tigers, and I know that most of ...

It's ok, but I agree with Snoink. Capitallizing every word is annoying, but if it is essential in a poem, don't listen to our comments. RR*