RowanHowler

Ah sarcasm, my second language. I agree with you on almost every point here. I don't think i was born to it, but maybe molded slowly. Sarcasm is indeed a ...

Hello :oops: Just wanted to drop in and introduce myself. i'm just recently 20 and like many, working on my first novel. Fantasy is my favorite so if anyone wants ...

Hello, I liked the premise of this piece, but as you say, it needs some fleshing out and editing. I suppose an explanation of how the fire started is foremost, ...

Hello, I liked this story so far! I love the misery of Noel, which you set up in the first paragraphs. The atmosphere is shrouded and then pierced with light ...

Author's Note This is my first novel that's made it past ten chapters so please be gentle but at the same time feel free to critique anything and everything. I ...

Sorry if this is answered elsewhere, I didn't see it in the guides. How do i mark something as favorite or put it on "watched"?

Amber was poised in a fashion that appeared both intensely comfortable and alluring. Her long legs could be seen, peaking out from behind the large, rosewood desk. It was hard ...

Hello, Not much to comment on on this chapter. It's very well written, as always, and the characters are easy to like or dislike, depending on which one it is. ...

Hello, the rip in her skin was covered in brown ringlets and the gaudy pearl noose that dangled from her neck.- I didn't quite understand the first part of this, ...

Hello, “It’s been very… tiring.”- maybe "“It’s been a very… tiring day.” ACK! NO! Don't hurt Tanner! he he. I think maybe the danger level form an elemental should be ...

Hello, Interesting that in a magic school the headmaster tries not to use magic. I like it :-) where his students could simply be children.- maybe "teenagers" since most of ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this piece. It was vivid with imagery and each line was concise and clearly well thought out. I think you made each word count and the ...

Hello, Good job on the story so far! I do so love the characters and the focus you put on them. The plot is not at all clear yet, but ...

Yeah it is supposed to be set in Germany but I didn't pick a specific place. Thanks so much for the great reviews! "I immediately thought of Casper the friendly ...

Hello, Excellent continuation of the story. I think the part of your writing that shined the most is its subtlety. You are able to add characterization with simple gestures or ...