RowanHowler

Thanks for the reviews! If I have spelling mistakes I'd really really appreciate if you can point them out specifically, otherwise I may never find them. I appreciate your feedback, ...

Thanks for the advice! I really appreciate the feedback. Hmm, I'm not sure why you can't find the prologue, it should be in the folder. I'll check it out. I ...

Hello again, Lol. I find your beginning interesting here. It walks the line of being spotted as a way to simply describe the character and transitioning smoothly into the piece. ...

Hello, I love, love, love the beginning poem. It really sets up the story well and is a wonderful piece of work on its own. You seem to know a ...

Lol. You seem like a cool person and I think it's pretty sweet that you live in Alaska (at least I think you mentioned that somewhere). I think you did ...

Hello, This had a very depressed and frightening feel to it, which I happen to love :-). Your descriptions are very vivid, every line simply adding onto the luscious imagery ...

Hello, Comments: This piece is really rich with interesting ideas. being friends with a ghost seems potentially an important part of the story. Instead of throwing all this backstory as ...

Comments: Your parents obviously don't want you rolling about in the mud like a dog. I think that you would have done the same.- hah! I really like this dialogue. ...

Hello, Hah, I know this will sound odd, but I felt this way as a child and still do sometimes. I much prefer night or at least twilight to day. ...

Hello, I think you have an interesting idea, and the bare bones of a great plot. The character has an interesting, tried and true story of avenging his parent's which ...

Hello, Comments: He was a frog that had originally been a tadpole.- oh my gosh that was funny! After your build up it was especially comical. I like the faintly ...

Hello, Things To Consider: My dad said later that she’d seemed petrified.- you could take this out since it seems obvious from her behavior. That night I got a long ...

Thanks for the GREAT review. Whew, I think I made most if not al of the corrections. In explanation about the vampire werewolf question, this was originally written for another ...

Hello, One of the things that makes this story so endearing is that it is real, the girl's mannerisms make her charming in an instant and I for one now ...

The plot sounds interesting but needs a little more developing. I would warn you to focus a lot more on things beside this boy's physical beauty if you want the ...