RossLighting

Hi Queenofscience, i'm glad you loved the story. I know i did a lot of dialogue but it is a descriptive story. And a longer story wasn't an idea i ...

Yeah

I can tell you've done this before, no offence

Wow. This is a really good poem, with amazing use of words pushed together to make this.

Right Storm, thanks for the criticism. Let me go through with it all. Firstly, I don't really mind about switching from 'this one' to 'he' its just kind of something ...

Moving words there. This was really inspirational and I hope it will inspire many more to publish books on their story.

God, this was really good. I just couldn't stop reading. It was simply wonderful to read such a good story. If its ok to ask, is this true or not?