Ross

Me likey too! Love the character's attitude.

Prologue The boy’s brow furrowed as he guided the paintbrush across the canvas. The chocolate-colored paint blotched on the canvas like blood welling from a wound… Wait a minute, wait ...

This was an amazing story! You left me at a major cliffhanger. PLEASE write more!

I liked this story. But the ending struck two different tunes. One was CLICHE and the other was WOW! Interesting...I can't decide which. But I liked how you kept the ...

Thank you very much for the cliffhanger article. I've been having trouble, but your article helped me out. Thanks again!

Profile of myself: Name: Ross Gender: Male Age: 14 going on 15 Interests: Writing, hair-styling, and READING :D Well, hello! I'm deafwriter_19 and as the name suggests, I have hearing ...

These pictures are so beautiful they are almost like a shot from a movie. I want to go to Hong Kong now. :smt040

This is a beautiful photograph. I think you could modify the hair by the chin because it looks like needles sticking out. Also, I love the mood that it created ...

I found it in Writer's Digest...said it was a pretty good site for support so I decided to give it a try. I liked what I saw and I signed ...

OMG! I loved the poetic beginning and then the way that you introduced the trouble. 'They weren't in their usual spots' Pretty damn good. And then I liked how you ...

Nice work! The only problem I had was the guy saying 'F--k' at the beginning.

Thanks, kitty15! I did most of what you suggested and I must admit it does flow much easier. Thanks!

I like the third-person thing too. And I like how you related the cold to Edward. Bellimiso...I don't know if that's right...

I once tried to write a novel and its working title was Highest Degree, because of this quote I found on the web: "The degree of ignorance and predjuice against ...

I agree with everyone. Keep it to what your common sense says that's the limit, give it an R rating if you're not sure about the rating, just to be ...