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Re: Chap. 3 or Wrong or Right
Wake up! Wake up, I splashed water on my face, trying to emerge from the fog that Chad had shrouded me in. Yet my hands still echoed with the thump ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: In His Arms
"I'm the girl in dark blue jeans." LOVED that line! This was a beautiful poem. Saw no typos and i think its fine where it is.
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Mask
very good poem. although, i cant figure out why it is in the fanfiction part. r u talking about vampires, wizards, Death Eaters? drop me a line, because im a ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Footsteps of a broken stranger
i loved this, max! although, i can't find "of a stranger" anywhere and i assumed that the title is part of the lyrics. this was very good! Worth a star!
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: For you were and will always be
Oh, my goodness! This was very heart-wrenching! I loved your choice of words--they seem to make the emotion flow through your poem, which I don't see a lot on here. ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 2 of Wrong or Right?
"Honestly, Chad!" I huffed as I stumbled up the stairs, my cousin's hands over my eyes. "Why all the secrecy?" "Because I want it to be a surprise," Chad's hot ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Removed #2
This is a beautiful poem. However, I'm a bit puzzled at the meaning behind it. Are you talking about a boyfriend, a son, a cousin? I think a deeper dig ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Strangers in the Fog
This is SOOOO good! Worth a star!
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: The Writing Mood
Oh my God. I have experienced writing mood SO many times. I get kicked off the computer when an idea just pops up. Honestly, my dad sets a limit for ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir
Wow. I was blown away. What Ray did was NOT right! And with your boyfriend right there! This is really one of the most shocking confessions I've ever read.
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Just Friends
Very heart feels sorry for the narrator on the way that his/her crush dismisses the saying so easily. :( Worth a star!
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Wrong or Right? (Chapter One)
“Chad’s not up yet.” I stepped inside the small foyer and mentally gawked at the number of bags on the floor as I faced my aunt, “Oh? When will he ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: The Spoon
This was very sweet, but also a bit weird.
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 2 of H/Hr fanfic
This is with collaboration with Summerless. You rock, Summerless! :smt041 Harry watched with faint amusement as Hermione was met with yet another invitation from the opposite sex to join her ...
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Harry/Hermione Fanfiction Chap. 1
This is in collaboration with the always amazing Summerless! “Hello, folks…” Harry Potter turned at the sound of his best friend’s voice. One eyebrow rose at the sight of the ...
Apr 23, 2008
