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YAY! I'm so happy! You know, I actually found this website when WD wrote it in the 2008 writing websites issue. This website is platinum compared to the others that ...

I like First and Third. However, what I would do to avoid this problem in the future is to take any phrases, words, etc. that you think are magical or ...

I think that you can add accents to reveal their characters and all that. Throw in the occassional "Ja" for a old German man, "y'all" for maybe a young Southern ...

Living in Mercer Island until our adulthood, Arabella, Liam, Alex and I often discussed what had made us come together. I said that it had been the fight. Arabella, Liam ...

Author's Note: The characters are based on my childhood friends. This resulted from a daydream from last summer. I found it, polished it and here it is! A lot of ...

I agree with Bella also. Change the font and space out the paragraphs. It gave me a headache to be honest.

I agree with Snoik. If you simply add a poll to boost your ego, then it's bad news!

“Got him, sir…” Velma Wilkinson dragged in the prisoner, shoving him in the chair. And it was one hell of a prisoner. Grizzled gray mane, the beginnings of a rough ...

I agree with Boing! You don't have to describe it entirely. But if someone touches a bruise, say something like a soft twinge/needle/etc. of pain shot through me. You can't ...

Thanks for the sheet! I will totally do this! I fill these out beforehand so I have a feel for my characters. ----UPDATE---- Here's what I did on one character ...

Okay, I know I've already posted on here, but I just have a great story that I'm going to post on here soon. I got the idea from watching Justin ...

Screaming. Dying echoes of screaming. Filling her head with long lost, painful memories of misery and havoc. Her voice was somewhere among those voices, those blood curdling voices. And she ...

This was a good poem, but it was a very confusing structure. Is it about math? Science? Cooking with numbers? ;) And also, try and bring the guy in my ...

I agree with Azila! Otherwise pretty good. The letters are hard to read. Try making them gold or colored.

I have a story that kinda has two central things. One is a romance and the other is to spy on the hero in the romance. Romantic fiction or Adventure? ...