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Re: Spy Networks
Just go to Wikipedia and type in Espionage. You'll find a TON of stuff in there. Hope this helps!
Jun 27, 2008 -
Re: Do you carry a notebook with you?
I use a notebook on trips where a computer isn't available. :lol: It's really green and plain, but a lot of people have given me weird looks when I write ...
Jun 27, 2008 -
Re: Hold the Phone
Okay, I loved the character's thoughts running through the story. They added some great comic humor to what would have been a very soap-opera story. That's good. I loved the ...
Jun 27, 2008 -
Re: True Clans
I love the Warrior series! Please continue with this! PLEASE!!!
Jun 27, 2008 -
Re: Main Attraction
I clutch the armrests of my seat so hard that the lady knitting next to me gives me an odd look. The magazine sprawls across my lap. The cover is ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Writing Playlists
I listen to music depending on the genre. If I'm writing something romantic, I'll listen to "My Heart Will Go On" by Celine Dion or "Say It Again" by Marie ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: Sex Scenes
Okay, I'll tell you how I feel about sex scenes. Basically, there are two rules: Importance and Explicitness. The sex scene has to matter to the characters--and the reader. In ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: Character descriptions for first person
Okay, the best way you can do this is to put it in dialogue: "I hate my hair. It's all...poofy!" "It looks nice and soft to me. Besides I like ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: Titles and Writing With Titles
Mostly, I give it a working title first that summarizes the concept of my story. If I was writing about a deaf woman who is being stalked, I would write: ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: How to Start Over
Okay, this is EXTREMELY rushed. You give us no depth to the character, Missy--and she seems to be the main character because the events revolve around her. Give her quirks. ...
Jun 18, 2008 -
Re: Surreal Submission
You’re making me talk too fast! Words blend together, we both can’t understand… And my tongue trips on To voice the words in my mind. You cause me to spin ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: I Need Help!
I think if it's supposed to be menacing, put something like: "I was in your house today..." If it's supposed to be reassuring, do something like this: "I hope to ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Info About London
What are the most upper-class sections called and what kind of buildings do the people there live in? What is the weather like in winter? How about domestic violence? Is ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: A New World: Chapter 3
This is so freaking awesome! I don't read much fantasy, but this really caught my eye. It's a wonderful premise. I love the concept of "entering" the head and all ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: making a book longer
Subplots are your friend here! I know I sound like a broken record, but I have to say it for EMPHASIS!!!!! If you're writing something and you find that it's ...
Jun 14, 2008
