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Re: Top 250 Cities on YWS
Yay! Bellevue ROCKS! I don't live there, but I live very close to there. I'm from Mercer Island, Washington...And despite what people might think, it is not a town for ...
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: Post Character Pictures!
Right now I am writing a story about a man that goes to his small town with his fiancee and runs into some trouble... Here is the man aka Trey ...
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: Picture Your Characters
Okay, so I'll explain... As I work on a story/novel, I visualize my characters as movie stars. And when I saw Stephenie Meyer's movie page, I thought maybe other writers ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Softy!!
*tries to choke back laughter by biting on his knuckles*
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Name: Laquyetec (Nickname: Laqu) Race: Nymph Heir of: Nobody Age: 19 Description: Large dark eyes, flowing blonde curls, a full mouth, an angelic heart-shaped face and a curvaceous body Personality: ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
HEEEEEEEEEERE'S THE FUNNY PIC!!!! :lol:
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Hello, hello! I know I've posted pictures on here already, but I cut my hair a bit drastically and instead of making you all wonder, I decided to unveil it! ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The Lone One
“There goes that impostor!” the priest cried. He gestured towards the doorway where just seconds ago a bloodied, beaten man had gone through. “He claims himself to be the Messiah! ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Secrets In Peril
SECRETS IN PERIL As the cat was yaw n ing, Douglas [s]pulled[/s] Pulled isn't very good description. How about hauled? his muscular frame up from the couch and walked over ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Awakening
This is admittedly full of grammar errors. Your spelling stuff is okay, but I need to give you a book about story-writing because this isn't exactly professional-looking work. And also, ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: For Your Return
FOR YOUR RETURN [Intro Verse] November, the leaves fall Still it already feels like winter Stand here, remembering How you always held me close Tears frozen, cannot cry Yet the ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Mother! Please!
This is very good! I like the deaf characters part! Probably because I'm deaf myself... But the paragraphs are HUGE chunks. Split some up. Have variety in the length. This ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: These Words
I have to agree with the first and second posters above me. (Hi, there!) :lol: This seems to have a very light impact on the reader. If you were trying ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: When Death Kissed the Moon
This was just a little something I cooked up yesterday and I hope you like it. ---- When Death Kissed the Moon “It’s been nearly a century since any goddesses ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: ~Daddy~
This was actually very refreshing to read. I had a little trouble with writing sex scenes and making sure they were appropriate for this site. You've paved the way for ...
Jun 27, 2008
