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Marissa stared at the man in front of her. At 29, he hadn't changed much, except for the broad shoulders [s]and the tighter, flatter stomach[/s] How can you see a ...

I detest writing by hand. DEEEETEST it! I write at the family computer and often, my parents have to kick me off. :lol:

Midnight Horror Island August 15 1:39 a.m. Ring......ring.... Marissa Calhoun burst out of the nightmare by the sound of her cell phone ringing. Yawning, she reached over to her nightstand ...

Okay, everyone's covered the nitpicks so I'll give my opinions. CHARACTERS You did a good job fleshing out the characters and everything. But if Lillian is the one to start ...

This was very sweet, but it bordered on cliche. A little bit. The memory stuff is cliche and it isn't very Ron-ish. Try it like this: "Ever since I saw ...

Let me give you some examples of gender separation in speech. Male: "I saw her run after that dog. Looked like she was wearing almost nothing." Female: "I saw her ...

It all depends on my characters. If someone is an army general, I know there's gonna be a swear in every third sentence. If it's a devout maiden, then I ...

Oddly, I love the romance genre. I love the chemistry between the two lovers, but guess what is tough? Dialogue. I have no idea how to write this and make ...

I never truly plan characters out. I just have a visual of them in my head and I know their basic personality. This way, I allow the characters more breathing ...

Wowee! This sounds fun! Thanks of thinking of it, Esme! FIRST STORY EVER It was when I was about 6 when I started it. Basically, this was a mashed up ...

I have several, ready? 1. LOCK (Lead, Objective, Confrontation, Knockout) 2. Always finish your story with a brief "debriefing" (tie the loose ends up). Harper Lee didn't end her story ...

I was confused about the theme also. I think if it is about God, then you should scatter more hints throughout BEFORE coming to the bridge. Right now, the bridge ...

Hannah Justen had the freedom of solitude. That was the only thing Leroy gave her. And he sometimes took it away. Like tonight. She had just received the news that ...

*is dizzy from effects* Wow! Overdramatic much? A picture of me being all film-noir. :D

Link! *In happy place* 10/10