RoseGryffindor

Wow. It's simple but it conveys alot of emotion. The feeling someone has when their girlfreind/boyfriend has just broken up with them (or you broke up with them because you ...

The poem is really cool. I like how it's deceptivley discriptive and makes you feel like your the narrator floating about looking at the burning world having this epiphany.

WOW! This is really good! I wish you could've extended it and added a little more. But overall I really don't have much to say. The beginning was specatacular I ...

The sun suffocates me and the still water crushes me as I lie here panting on this god forsaken island. I don't know how long they've left me here to ...

Thank you for all your comments. I will be sure to remember them when next I post/write.

It's me again! Ok, to start it was doing wonderfully until you got to the part where Aurilea helps give Beatra birth. There, it kinda rushes and isn't as shall ...

Hello! So I am going to grant your wish and comment on your story. Happy now? Ok, so overall it was really good. Ecspecially at the beginning you explained the ...

When you're part of something big , what are you willing to lose? For there will inevitably be a Cost. It may be small like your social life. But what ...