RoseGryffindor

Overall it was very cute. I like the little scene that appeared between the two characters. Though I'm not sure as to the age of the characters. I'm guessing they're ...

I know some of the questions I put in here like Why? is really a nobrainer as to Why it's like that but it helps with descriptions and clears up ...

Jhonny Depp is the best actor EVER! In the history of my world (notice how I put "my world"). This is a very good picture I love it very much.

wow! You're a really good writer! I knew you were writing, but I never read it. Anyways, yeah it was really good. I few mistakes I'm sure you'll catch if ...

Ok, the story was good just a few minor errors like spelling errors, but I'm sure if you go over it again you'll figure them out. The bit about her ...

Tch tch tch. You have to wait for the rest of the story to find out Sakura. (evil smily face)

“Dad can’t this thing go any faster!” “Relax Abbey, they’re all not going to disappear before we get there.” my mother soothed me. I sighed but remained silent. We had ...

I absolutely LOVED this story! It was hilarous! The Sarcastic Neon Muffin was my favourite. Ok, time for review time! One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of ...

I absolutely LOVED this story! It was hilarous! The Sarcastic Neon Muffin was my favourite. Ok, time for review time! One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of ...

I absolutely LOVED this story! It was hilarous! The Sarcastic Neon Muffin was my favourite. Ok, time for review time! One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of ...

I absolutely LOVED this story! It was hilarous! The Sarcastic Neon Muffin was my favourite. Ok, time for review time! One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of ...

Very well written. I liked it. You opened your arms,And I came running.Your sweet embrace,So loving and heart-warming.We drifted away, through each seconds of the day,By my side, I wish ...

Very well written. I liked it. You opened your arms,And I came running.Your sweet embrace,So loving and heart-warming.We drifted away, through each seconds of the day,By my side, I wish ...

Sorry, I didn't realize I had mispelled Mike's name wrong so when you're reading this Med is Mike. Sorry!

This i'm not sure if I want to make into an actual story. If you want more of this then comment asking for more and I'll write. The brick wall ...