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Re: If I Fall....
Beautiful!! I got little goosebumps reading it!
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Skin
Skin Skin is a wonderfully diverse thing. It can be red or pink or brown or yellow. It can range from smooth and soft to scaly and rough. And it ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Five Poems That Start With "S" - Skin
Skin Skin is a wonderfully diverse thing. It can be red or pink or brown or yellow. It can range from smooth and soft to scaly and rough. And it ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: 5 Poems That Start With "S" - Shoes
Shoes Oh how many different types of shoes there are! They house your feet and cover your feet. They can make your feet look sexy or casual. There are some ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-Part 3
Finally!!! The third Ch?/Part has come out!!! I would've commented yesterday but I was tired and didn't feel like it. But now I have! And I cannot wait for the ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Mr.Silence Must Die
Wow! This poem is so epic!! I love it! Congrats on getting it featured on YWS!!!
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Mary-Sue: A life
ahahaha Perfect! I found this just made my day, right here. This was awesome, just sayin'.
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Shining Bright
Wow. This is really good. Very indepth and I love the last sentence. I would change the "Shinin'" and all those others to they're regular form of "ing". It just ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Potty Breaks First, Saving the World Later
So, if you've read my "story" where I tell about me and my friends' wierd conversation about whether characters have to go to the bathroom or not then I guess ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Let me forget
It's beautiful! I'm very proud of you for writing something like this. You conveyed you feeling clearly and I feel sad for you. I AM sorry though for trying to ...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Happy Valentine's Day
It's awesome. Worded and wrote beautifully. So sad though. STILL LOVED IT!!
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Socks
Socks? Socks you say? I have socks! I've got toe socks, ankle socks, Tube socks and knee socks. I've got socks with poka-dots and socks with stripes. I've got fancy ...
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Potty Breaks First, Saving the World Later
I never really wanted to write this but people keep saying I should so here I go!! If you want to put something in here or have ideas please tell ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-part one
Awesome-tastic! Pulls you right from the beggining. Haha, sometimes I go to write a critique then I finsish reading the sentence and then realize it's fine like that. XD Holy ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Florence and the Machine
This is a novel based on the songs by the band Florence and the Machine. This is my first draft of it so far. I haven't gone through and edited ...
Feb 8, 2011