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Re: La Luna y el Delfín (The Moon and the Dolphin)
Omygosh Solvy this poem is not ridiculous! I love it so much it's probably my favourite! I wish I was that talented when I was younger. On a September night, ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Silly Me
Cute! Very creative. Silly me, I'm back here again . Holding on to something that I want far away change to "that remains far away. And, here I am, trying ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 3 (Draft #2)
I liked it alot, but I feel like it's rushed through alot. You need to take time to make sure it flows and detail certain scenes like prom and focus ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 2 (Draft #2)
It's cute and getting so interesting. I like the originality of it. But the speaking part with her sister when she tells her about Adam's IM friend request just doesn't ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: On My Way To Ben & Jerry's
The first one is my favourite. The coloring with it and how there's like this creamy yellowness to it that gives colors so much color. I love the mail box. ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
Haha! I love it!!
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: .
Really pretty. But you need to capitalize.
May 26, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
"Pant's on the ground! Pant's on the ground! Lookin' so cool with your pants on the ground!" Haha sorry, I had to do that. :) Love the poem! It's so ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: How'd you discover YWS?
I was telling my friend, Sakura, about my stories and she told me about hers. Then she told me about this website, where you can "publish" your stories and poems ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: She Was Blind
I'm not the best at grammar but I'll try. I looked at the dark sky as I lay shouldn't this be past tense? or you can make, thought "think" down ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
LIke the tons of other people, I am in total love with this story! I've always imagined what it would be like if Romeo and Juliet were in the Modern ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Pictures
Like!!!! and Love!!!!
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Five Poems that Start With S - Snow
Snow Snow is very controversial topic. Some people hate it and some people love it. Of course there are the ones, Who take it as it is. It’s cold and ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: You were wrong
Love it. Says so much with so little. I totally get what it says and definatly agree. Life may be short but all whims have a consequence if you're not ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: To My Stalker
It was wonderful. Very intense, right on the verge of creepy alittle. I don't know if you meant to do it but the very ending, "So, I warn you, lousy ...
May 4, 2011
