RoseGryffindor

Beautiful!

Ahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahaha. (That's all I have to say. :) Good job! It was hilarious. Made my day.)

On a day of utmost peace and happiness, A rose bush shall appear where His Tree once stood. It shall bear two of the most beautiful flowers one has ever ...

Go to this first plz. and read little part of story in there. I would like that to be included. Alright, have fun! i]Ahhh...[/i] Arias was finally glad to relieve ...

Beautiful. If only all those haters out there could read this. Her best friend condemned her, For the things she felt inside. Her best friend now hates her, Because she ...

Wow, really long but It's so good! I know this is supposed to be about demon fighters so, in the first part with the actual demon fighters you should get ...

I love it! It's so well written though I must say the begginning was a little confusing at first though when I started to read more I got it. You ...

Pretty impressive for the middle of the night. It's not all that cheesy either. There was just a couple ( ok, a lot) grammar issues but overrall it was greally ...

I like it! The rhyming wasn't bad, I thought it was very creative. You had a lot of good things going on; metaphores and imagery and personification. Really well written. ...

Ah, I remeber haikus. We had to do a couple in school. They really challenge the imagination with their limitations. I like this one. Short and sweet yet the message ...

Beautiful! So much shown in so little words. Everyone can relate to this one way or another. Love the indepth and the imagery.

So beautiufl and simple yet so deep. I felt a deep sense of beautiful seriosness fall over me when I read it at the truth in this.

This is really pretty and very creative but you should add punctuation to clear it up. red on black blue on gold and not a drop to drin kone three ...

Beautiful. It has just the right amount of sadness in it so it's not too overwhelming. It's like a story and I like it like that.

beautiful. Just beautiful. I don't have much to say in ways of improving. It conveys all the hurt and innocence of the narrator.