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Okay. I have a nitpick haha. She seems way too comfortable at his house. I mean skipping down the hall and easily talking with his mother? I think her feeling ...

Always, You are an amazing writer. This story may be your golden goose. The emmotion I felt in these chapters was intense. I can very highly relate to everything Shilah ...

Wow. This was very good. Obviously every story has room for rewrites and editing but I think this is very impressive. I love how you described the characters because that ...

Okie dokie, here is the whole, entire first episode! I've edited twice but I know it can be edited more and more so help me out guys! I'd really appreciate ...

I used a screenwriting program and it does all the formating for me, I've used it for a couple years, but when I went to post it on here all ...

O Romeo! You doth say it too much! I liked this but as the other's already said, switch up the O Romeo's. It will improve this piece a lot. You ...

I enjoyed this. I love rhyming poems! Haha. I also liked that it was short, sweet, and to the point! Sometimes poets can get so wrapped up in their words ...

I found this very interesting. It was definately dark and strange but it's good to be broad about what you read. I thought it was well written, there weren't any ...

Thanks guys! I'm designing it for tv actually, If it gets good enough I want to use it in my application for a TV writing program thing. This is just ...

I adored this. Hermione was always my favorite character in the books (save for Luna). I recall dressing up as her for one halloween, wig and all. Anywho, the review. ...

Here is the second act! So that's another commercial break! Haha, oh TV. ACT TWO OVER BLACK-- MARTIN, 2010 EXT. CORN FIELD-MARTIN, INDIANA - DAY The golden fields are full ...

HAHAHAHA! That was great! A true day brightener and work of genious! (There was a line where Leto says "You can that again!" I think "say" is supposed to be ...

So it has been quite a long time since I have posted on here! But I have religiously been working on this idea for almost two years...well not THIS idea ...

So I'm not exactly sure what to post. Sorry I've been away. I have had a terribly aweful week. :( But anyways I'm stumped. Whoever knows whats going on should ...

Griff- The Fox told them to press the button. He was being cryptic and trying to mess with them and they all knew it. But what could they do at ...