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Re: Trashed (with an almost happy ending)
I liked it, I kind of don't get the message/point but who says it has to have one or be clear, this is your writing. I love that you used ...
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Re: This is the child...
I liked it, it was easy to read. And again like with your poem, Hide me.. I could really create mental images. I love the eigth stanza where you say.. ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: Hide me...
I actually really liked it, I could create a mental image in my head and relate the words to pictures. Bravo =]
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: In The End
And now we welcome Rory Evelyn Legend to the stage for her poetry debut! Sorry if this is in the wrong poetry section..it's my first time! =] ****************************************** In The ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: God of Emotions
**my bad, ignore that last post....oh crap I love that Tex is the next almighty!**
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: God of Emotions
Viola- "I don't know, you guys are the Gods." She shrugged and fiddled with a rip in the knee of her jeans. Suddenly Theo and Tex came in, carrying Entry, ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Juniper Halls
James- "Yes, I'm sure." when the shaking became too much to handle he excused himself to the bathroom. He splashed cold water on his face and stared into the mirror. ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Juniper Halls
James- Tell you? She wanted him to tell her, she had no idea how wrong she was. He just shook his head. His hands started trembling and he cursed himself. ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: God of Emotions
Viola- Why me? It kept repeating in her head, why me? She is nothing special, she doesn't have superhuman strenth nor can she shoot fire from her eyes, but suddenly ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: God of Emotions
Viola- Viola shrugged off Fly's touch, "Get away from me, all of you!" she screamed the last three words. She could see the front door, if she got to it, ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Juniper Halls
James- "Buisness, you could say." Buisness right. He stared at his water turning the glass on the table. He was fidgeting, which meant it would only be a matter of ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Jurassis Park 2042
Reese- She just sat there frozen. He had kissed her and told her that he loved her. She was in shock. AHHHHH I HATE NOT KOWING WHAT TO WRITE! lol
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: God of Emotions
Viola- "Oh because I want to be the next Godess of whatever!" She yelled feeling rage build up in her and bubble in her gut. She had never been this ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Juniper Halls
James- He hadn't even realised how early it was. The lights were off downstairs, the whole house was still asleep. He crept quietly to the kitchen, not even noticing the ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Supernatural
*singer..lilith isn't really around everyone you could just writer about her evil plan lol..hey guys I am also going to writer for Bobby..but not posting a profile yet* Bobby- Bobby ...
Mar 18, 2008
