RoryLegend

James- He wasn't sure about playing with the girls. He didn't know how much longer he could stay at Desmonda's. He had talked to her about a job, but since ...

Good, good. I just felt like the end wasn't really powerful, like it wasn't meant to end there. And there were a few parts that were oddly broken up. I ...

You made me think of my cousin. He served in Iraq and will go back after he gets married. The character you portrayed in this poem touches on everything that ...

Nick- He looked up to find his room mate gone. Nick shrugged and opened the window. It was rather stuffy. He started unpacking his clothes and other belongings that he ...

Nick- He sat and waited, but no one came into the room. There were no classes today, one of the perks of arriving early. He was going to love all ...

Viola- Viola pulled up in front of Dean's house, heart racing. Maybe if she got there in time, maybe. She sprinted into the house, using all those years of soccer ...

I liked it, good imagery. It made me picture a scene from a disney movie that I can't remember the name of where Goofy is a faery and has to ...

So I was thinking about my other poem, The End, and reading poetry on the site and this kind of floated into my head with no real effort from me ...

Viola- Viola sat down on the couch and clutched her stomache. Something was wrong, she could feel it. She started to have a hard time breathing and fell from the ...

Yay, I liked it (I thought the rhyming was fine btw), it was a good story, and it makes me think. I want to know more about this old lady, ...

Haha, very nice..one thing..I disagree with LittleLoveableSock. I don't think you should have taken the 'a' out of "Before making her into a stew." When I read the poem the ...

Viola- It was mid day now. She still had a few hours before she was in the red zone. The red zone being that when she didn't come home from ...

I think everyone is stuck...quick magical unblock spell!

Nick- "Young, Channing." the girl next to him said. He took his key and room assignment from the lady and gave her a smile and a quiet thank you before ...

ok sounds good, so Blair is going to sneak out again tonight and someone is going to find her missing, maybe Leo, and she could bump into Aedomir in the ...