RoryLegend

guys im so lost..i have no idea where my character went...help?

Wow sorry guys here is Portia: Name: Portia Age: 11 Appearance: long black hair, usually curly because she doesn't bother to do anything with it, blue eyes, tan skin, not ...

Ah yes Edward as in Edward cullen..I don't know I just thought the name was fitting..I think i have officially given up on it survived about four days..I think that's ...

Thanks for the crits..I wrote it really late at night and I typed it in word document and it has some pressets that change words around, i dont know it ...

Wow I like this a lot I really want to read more please please please write more. I like most of the people who have commented hate rapists but have ...

Chapter One I didn’t even realize it was happening the first time it happened. I thought he had said it, I thought the words had been spoken. I thought wrong. ...

I have to tell you just out of moral scrupples that I have not read this all the way...but it is getting late here and my eyes are starting to ...

This made me laugh and be sad at the same time. It was very clever and well written. Ah who cares if you can't spell customer..we are all flawed. But ...

I'll take Portia!

A Place Called Home One voice. One dream. One hope. A million like come from a million different ways. A million things to know, a million words to say. Silence ...

Eyes that refuse to see Search the world Stare out the window And pray for a better view Ears that will not hear Strain to catch the whispers Listen to ...

I enjoyed this it was very well written and I liked the length. Sometimes I think people write way too long poems that don't make sense to anyone besides them ...

I really like the line "Build me up to break me down" it was a really good line..bravo..sorry all I got for you now...keep writing!

Very good.. at first I was picturing the scene in the Romeo + Juliet movie with Leonardo DiCaprio..then I started picturing something different which I liked it was really original ...

It was took me a while to actually understand it but I'm slow so don't take it personally. You did a good job I just had a hard time actually ...