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Jack St. John- There was a knock on the door. But the person didn't wait for a reply to enter. It was Joseph. "How's the room?" He asked. "Oddly familiar. ...

Hello! Disclaimer: I do not know how to really crit a play..I write mostly movie I will do my best. Sorry if some stuff is wrong. The age question: I ...

Joseph Konner- I leaned my head back on the seat and gripped the arm rests as the plane took off. I was holding my breath which really didn't matter but ...

Also, put a title on at the top of your script. I know that you put it in the topic subject but if you sent a manuscript of your script ...

Alrighty, so I am interested..but I am also confused. What is going on here? Your dialogue and your information are all mixed up together. Ah! It's okay, it's okay. This ...

Hello! So I have to be honest. I lost interest. I'm not trying to be harsh but it sounds like you have a somewhat good idea started and I think ...

Jack St. John- I wasn't suprised when Alana followed Drake out, I was suprised when she climbed into the backseat of the car. I wasn't too keen on her going, ...

Brian- I couldn't belive it. First day on the job and already I was trapped in a room with a crazy lady weilding a gun. This was just great. I ...

soooooo....yeah ummmm..I shall place Corrie at the scene..I lost Brian a page ago but shall also place him there.

Jack St. John- "Joseph's helicopter is taking us to London in less than an hour. We're going to meet with the Breed group in Lodon in a prearranged spot," I ...

Name: Dr. Peter Davin Age: 27 Country: USA Organization: CIA Appearance: Shaggy (but not too shaggy) black hair, green eyes, tall, slender/ lean, Personality: very smart, keeps to himself most ...

*AH get better soon!!*

Corrie 2:08 pm outside the locker room He had smiled at me. And I, like an idiot, had smiled back. It had been involuntary. His smile had just made me ...

Joseph Konner- I slid my hands in my pockets and stared at Jack, my best friend for the past four hundred or so years. We had been through everything together ...

*so I'm pretty sure this is a territorial war right? I'm not sure. But Jack and Joseph are going to london, something is going to happen there..though I won't say ...