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Peter Davin- I sat next to Alanna and looked around the room. Just by looking at the people, by studying their body posture and facial expressions I could tell which ...

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Oh you are fine, I just didn't know what to do and I wanted to let you finish your post first. Peter Davin- "We're here to find the Black Fox." ...

I don't know how to post pictures AHHH!! Someone help me! I have a picture with Lloy Ball...USA mens Olympic Volleyball player. See it is Olympic themed!

Here my out EdwardCullen... There are other books in the world. I really do think I would like the story if Bella was not the one narrating it. That is ...

Jack St. John- I didn't exactly know everything that was going on, but I understood the gravity of the situation. And, Joseph was worried, I could tell. Joseph usually kept ...

So Layleun is posting...what should I do? Help...anyone?

Hmm, this was very interesting. There were just a few typos where a my should have be a me or an any should have been an an, but other than ...

Hello there and Welcome to the YWS. We seem to have a lot of new members lately its great! Here are some suggestions/rules: 1. Keep the review/posting ratio at a ...

Haha I quite enjoyed this. It was nice to read something different. You did a spot on job. The only teensy weensy thing I would do is just make it ...

Alright I am definatly interested. There were a few grammatical errors: Allowing her to relax she began to change. I think it should be: Allowing herSELF to relax and She ...

I need to be honest with you...I didn't read the whole thing. You really need to space out your paragraphs properly, otherwise it is wayyy to hard to read. If ...

So I'm confused.

Corrie- I looked up at Dr. Morrow, "Do you want me to help you out?" I asked him. He seemed to be deep in thought. Maybe he was thinking about ...