RoryLegend

alright thanks. By the way if I sounded like rude or unappreciative of your review when I listed those five points I'm sorry. I wasn't trying to be defensive or ...

Jude- "Go ahead and take a look at the book, maybe you can figure out some of it's secrets." I said picking up the sissors, "just hold still while I ...

Thank you both for your comments. The whole comma thing, I wanted it to sound broken. Each part was a different idea. 1.concept-little sloppy 2.rhythm-needs much improvement 3.idea- talking about ...

I I stand here living. I stand here dying. I am walking. Where am I going? I am human. Right? Does being human also make me an animal? I am ...

This was really good. It is definatly a really sad story. i like that you didn't need to write paragraphs and paragraphs to explain what was going on and to ...

haha haha nicely done.

Hello! You silly goose you! This poem is wonderful. Its short and sweet and to the point. I like short poems because sometimes long poems can just become a big ...

Bird Oh to be a bird! To soar and dive over mountains and oceans. To be free, to know no bounds. To have no one to answer to. To see ...

Whoa, you just blew me away. And you are only thirteen! Jeez! I'm so jealous of your mad writing skills. That was really deep and really touching. It flowed nicely ...

Yay! First critique. You really left me wanting to know what the heck she wrote down on that post it note! That is the mark of a good writer, leave ...

Maybe she's like the little ones You see all the time on TV, Their skin so thin, their bones so sharp, You turn away so you don't have to see. ...

My bad, I was about half alseep when I typed this last night, but the thing is it was on my mind to actually post it because I had been ...

Jude- I half smiled half smirked then handed him the glasses, "Cut your own hair then. The spell won't work with out it." I immediatly regretting being irrationally angry for ...

Not laugh out loud histerical, but slightly humorous maybe? I don't know. Let me know. All You Can Be Solid stares through unseeing eyes, leaves a feeling like the world ...

Nothing Is Wrong To be completely empty, would be better than to feel like this. No one said life was easy, but I didn't know it could get this hard. ...