RoryLegend

Way to be. I don't have much to critique on this. I just wanted to tell you that your title really makes me laugh. I like! The story was definatly ...

God created Adam and Eve. Not Adam and Steve. I don't know if that was meant to be funny but I pretty much died laughing when I read that. It ...

You definatly drew me in with your style of writing. I like. Keep it up. Now, there were probably grammatical errors and things, but I am so bad at grammar ...

Nicely done. I didn't get the title until I realized towards then end that all of the other people considering suicide are stopped by someone, therefore they get a blank ...

What the heck! I'm so jealous of your writing skills! I really liked the narrator. His character was very well developed and deep in a way that you didn't have ...

Hm, this was definatly interesting. I like the angle you are going for with the story and how it never really happens the way it did in the books and ...

Hahaha You make me laugh.

Between Heaven and Hell Chapter Two- Ant farms quickly become ant cemeteries When I woke up, I was in a bus terminal in Chicago. There was a ticket in my ...

Oh wow, thanks. I really appreciate. I actually have the next parts so I will post them. I will also be updating this part using the grammar changes Hannah gave ...

Wow, I knew I sucked at grammar but I didn't know I sucked that bad. Haha. This is just my first draft but I will definatly fix all of that ...

Somewhere between Heaven and Hell Chapter One- Girl Interrupted The library was small. That was why I told myself I left. Because the library in the school was small enough ...

Personally, I like this one more. I think they are both really great but I think this one flows better and has more to the story. It still had that ...

Whoa dude, deep, deep stuff. Don't take this in the wrong way because it is meant as a compliment, I feel like this would be one of those poems that ...

My eyelids slightly ajar before the flew open Is the above "the" supposed to be they? Grammatically this poem needed some help. You don't really have any punctuation at all, ...

Haha this was great. It is very refreshing to read soemthing that is both smart and interesting at the same time. You did this very very well. I was a ...