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Only thing I can say here is the confusion in my head with Nate, Nathan and Nathaniel lol. Nate can be short for both, i think, and with both being ...

I'm not gunna criticise this at all- partly because it would take me a million years to work out what's going wrong with a poem but mostly because i think ...

*Merry, I think this is a good story starting now! Just have a few suggestions for you, hope you don't mind! When you say the buildings are 'crunched together', do ...

Great piece! I can't think of much to criticise, just maybe comment on the elevated way of speaking, it seems kind of old-fashioned to me... Hey, maybe you talk like ...

Thought I'd give your portfolio a quick glance since you were kind enough to read my story! This was the one I picked and it was class, i really enjoyed ...

Hi Katie, I'm new to this site and poetry really isn't my forte, but I think this poem will really speak to a lot of people going through the same ...

This story is heartbreaking but I can feel it going somewhere, there's a definite direction! First piece I've reviewed though, so apologies for the lack of suggestions... But Jake seems ...