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Re: Roma and Julius
Thats brilliant. Good idea having them as toys, it was a different aproach. The rhyming pattern was off in a few place but that is all the complaints which i ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Retaliation
I liked this a lot. :) It was too short, you should put more work into it and give it a proper ending, try and change the weather, or say ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Hunted: Part One
Hey. This piece caught my attention from the start, so this was a good thing because there is only a certain writing technique which can capture my attention. :) So ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
No I never even heard of it:) _________________________________ the person below me has got four wisdom teeth
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: 'To Kill a Mockingbird'
I read "To Kill A Mocking Bird" for English last year. I absolutely loved this book. I think it made an impact on me. I had never really thought about ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
The book does have a symbolic meaning. It was written shortly after The Great War and showed how people can act when they are put in extreme conditions. It is ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: The Road not taken
Hey, Im not very great with poetry, so if what I say next sounds stupid don't judge me. Okay I read this poem and I got the gist of it, ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Why The Boy Cried 'Wolf'!
Hello, I really enjoyed this script, and yes i did find it funny. It was a good idea to take the character known as 'the boy who called wolf' and ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Dont Follow Me
I liked it!!! ......... ..............Good stuff. Keep up the good work=]
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Rooftops
I don't like depressing poetry, you should be happy=] There is alot more people out there who are worse off then you...(of course there is people that are better off ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: 101 Reasons
Hey there I liked this poem, but why is it called 101 reasons? I thought it was going to be much longer. And there was grammatical errors, but other than ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: I Held Time in my Hand
Hey Adrian I liked this poem alot...:D You did a nice job, i like the way you repeated the line 'i held time in my hand' by dong this it ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: a short letter to home
I like this letter, I thought it was well written. I especially liked the end when he tears apart the letter, it makes sense, why would you have sent that ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: The Future
its goood!!!! But not a chance that that happened in your high school:P
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Boredom!
I have come to a stage in my life which entails the word Boredom :!: I find myself to be bored very often. This is probably due to the fact ...
Oct 21, 2008
