Rodhead

This is a short story! My heart was racing. I could hear the thud of my boots as they came into contact with the cobled street. I never thought in ...

I want to read more! :D What happens next ? Are you writing more to this! It's a great idea! It reminded me somewhat like the film the island. Do ...

Hey I read both poems, and honestly , I disagree with what everybody else said! I actually prefered the first version of the poem. I liked the way that it ...

Hey great poem< i couldn't find much fault with it :D The deepest ocean; The clearest sky. A soaring eagle flying high. Nice stanza :wink: Faded denim trudging the sand; ...

I need help, it's just an idea. Really i had intended the poem only to have the first verse, but it seemed a bit bare. But i definitely think it ...

Yea your right this version is away better:D I like it:D

I wrote this at age of 11. :D I like icecreams, Icecreams like me. It's a natural habit, Like sugar with tea. Like a hurl without a sliothar, Would be ...

Is this supposed to be a poem?:smt101 Why are high school students are crazy? Are they picking on a nerd or are they caught up in being popular? Do they ...

Hey, You asked me to critique this poem ages ago, I really didn't get the time to do this :wink: until now :D I think the cocept is great, the ...

Hey This was auch a good idea:D The only problem with redoing this is that J.K. Rowling is such a good writer that you are obviously going to be compared ...

Hey :D From this piece I have gathered that the girl in the story is from a poor/not so wealthy background. I think that you should make this more obvious ...

For our hearts are as cold as ice that makes us hateful and yet sensual, For we are the fallen enemy who finds passion in your sweet blood, For there ...

Thanks for your helpful comments. I have taken your advice and 'modified' the poem. I hope you prefer this one :P

God gave us handbags so we would not have to stuff things into our pockets! God did not give us men so that they could stuff our things into their ...

I feel that abortion is totally wrong. I don't even understand why people can say it is accetable to have an abortion for certain circumstances. If you believe that abortion ...