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I really liked the poem. Especially the revelation at the end. I actually thought that it was your mother that had died not you. Your voice in it is really ...

This is really controversial!Are you from Libya? What was it that inspired you to write this may i ask? I can see it's full of anger. It is really good ...

Awh! I really liked your poem. There seems to be so many words in it, its cluttered. I't shouldn't be. I know you are going through a journey writing this ...

Hi Tranquility! :) I loved your poem so much. The structure, rhythm and rhyme was perfect as well as the language :). A brilliant poem which I'm sure many teenagers ...

Hey I liked this poem! :) thats why I chose to critique it :) Saying that I still have a few complaints to make :wink: The wind sent you a ...

Thanks for the reviews :) This is a poem about a girl in my school who committed suicide, that may be why it's so personal! Thanks for the critiques and ...

I'm reading "the Historian" at the moment! It's brilliant! :) Has any body read that one before? :)

That's actually brlliant! There was one part which was a little sticky and didn't flow brilliantl then you’re love sick and ill. would when not be a better choice here ...

A cupboard in a workhouse, or so they say. Five others of "her kind" stumbled upon her today. a noose to hold her tight a leap through the air. . ...

Hey I like the oem :)! How long did it take you to write it though? Or did you just get an inspiration? :) Truly, we are ignored Often we ...

Hey I loved it! Maybe it's because I am a chemistry student myself! But, yeah its really great! I think you were being slightly modest when you said it's probably ...

Morcant hurried through the woods, keeping his eyes on his prey. It ran some ten yards ahead of him, its paws thumping on the ground and its tail wagging in ...

In the barn she lay, Gazing at the hay. In the field she stood, Staring at the mud. Staring at the mud. Blankness filling her mind, As she silently drifts ...

Is this better or worse ? You broke me like a china doll, Released me from your clutch. Watched me as I fell I hit the ground You walked away. ...

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