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Re: Looking for talented writers to collab with.
Hey there, I might as well be the first ey ;) Id be glad to give you a hand when I get some time, which should be in about a ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: Stepping out of the shadows!
Hi all, A couple years back I joined this website and for a time it was invaluable to helping me improve my writing. I have been busy for awhile now ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: Random poem cacophony!
Hi guys, It has been far too long since I dropped by - going on 3 years in fact! So having spotted this section of randomness, I couldn't resist poking ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: Shimmer
Hi there, This is very beautiful. The title captivated me immediately! I have a few corrections: Not happy anymore, dont want anything, go way. Don't should be apostrophized (just made ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Shimmer
Really I'm just a ghost, cast in chains, in the rain. Not happy anymore, don't want anything, go away. Wish I could change it all, bend time and breathe forever. ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: A bandits fortune
Thanks alot for the comment :) I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I do agree that it could flow better towards the end, maybe from the second half. When I ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: A bandits fortune
I'm really glad you guys like my poem :) It's really pleasing that the description and mood came off well. I will work on the flow of the poem and ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Cat poem
I swear. I wouldn't get by without a dictionary most days haha. Thanks for the heads-up and I'm glad you like the poem :)
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Fox poem
Hey justagirl, Thanks for your comment :) I've gotta apologise for the fact that i just slapped this onto the forum right from notepad lol. I usually would have added ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: A bandits fortune
So yeah... this is just something I threw onto notepad. Almost absent-mindedly I'm such a misunderstood and eccentric genious... lol, just kidding. Enjoy the poem ladies and gents. A bandits ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: A bandits fortune
So yeah... this is just something I threw onto notepad. Almost absent-mindedly I'm such a misunderstood and eccentric genious... lol, just kidding. Enjoy the poem ladies and gents. A bandits ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Fox poem
Prowling the sweeping meadows, and ancient twilit trees. Dancing flickering shadows, under infinite star strewn skies. Playful chasing, red-maned prey with glee. Leaping through a sea, of glowing ligh
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Cat poem
Beneath a dusty house, prowls a feline of enchanting grace seeking his furry muse, he slinks out to find her hidden place the one who soothes him truly lies there ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Blood Bearers
Hey there. I decided to write a short story which is based within the warhammer 40k universe. My aim is to eventually write a piece of fiction as good as ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: The Blood Bearers
Hey there. I decided to write a short story which is based within the warhammer 40k universe. My aim is to eventually write a piece of fiction as good as ...
Jun 20, 2011
