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Re: what are some good villan names?
For villians I just pick names I don't like...e.g: Blake, Adam, Drake. Or if someone was mean to me from my childhood I just pick their first name...e.g: Jim, Ben, ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Tough life
With the prologue there's a lot of telling and not much showing. You do it rather bluntly too. e.g.: It was then that I found my dad was an alcoholic ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: What bands/artists are your favorite?
10 Years 32 Leaves A Perfect Circle Breaking Benjamin Chevelle Hurt Korn Mastodon Mnemic Nine Inch Nails Pantera Puscifer Rob Zombie Slayer System of a Down Tool The list is ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Photoshop fun
The first one is awesome nice job on it. The other two are alright. Were you trying to do a macro? It kind of looks like you selected the flowers ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Ghandi Didn't Live Out of a Holiday Trailer
The first reviewer for this seemed to have pointed out the issues. So I'll just say a few things. I love the first three lines of this, it sounds like ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Nadia and Monticello
You have the dialogue down, or it's at least what I'd think it'd sound like during those years. The overall voice is pretty impressive as well. This sentence was a ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
6/10 it's interesting...still trying to figure out what's behind the text though. I just read up. People didn't know who Steven Tyler was... :(
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Self Portrait
It's art. But it does have that myspace feel to it. Did you use the sepia option? Looks like it. I'd suggest upping the contrast on this and maybe doing ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Yo...
I have a feeling this site doesn't like the type of stuff I mostly write. Probably was a bad idea to join.
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Jon O.
The shading is a little off, I'm not too fond of that. Forehead doesn't look too good in comparison. I think I'll work on the background sometime soon since it ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Yo...
Favorite author is Douglas Coupland and I guess Harlan Coben...not sure if anyone has heard of either though. And yes I have four tattoos. One on each wrist and one ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Suburbia
Author's Note: I realize some people might not understand some words in this. I'd hate to have a key (kind of distracting and then people would have to scroll up)...but ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Yo...
I see there's a welcome thread already but then people have made their own intro I'm going with the latter. Sorry. My username is Robin but call me whatever you ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
I like how rawly written this is. It's pretty honest and to the point. I didn't see much wrong with it. Just one part you forgot to capitalize Rook and ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: The Other Side
Really nice use of imagery, I could picture just about everything you described in this. Also, good job on the dialogue it was believable when most fics I've read don't ...
Apr 28, 2008
