Rob

I really liked reading this. The only thing I really hope about is that this is not a true story. The poem really brings up strong feelings, from start to ...

Wait.. wait untill I pick myself off the floor. *falls back again* What you have written is just amazing. The idea is brilliant. As I was reading , I was ...

Welcome! If you say that this could be "The One" , than I would really like to read it. Do not forget, have fun while writing, put feeling in it, ...

It was a great read. I love the way the story advances , and all the feelings that emerge from the words. I feel the same always all the time ...

I am not seeking for it to be structurally right, just emotionally. [ at least for now ] Wrote it after spending New Years Eve with someone really special to ...

It's cute. I could see the whole thing in front of my eyes. The description of the moment is perfect. But I agree, it misses a climax , the point ...

I swear my heart is beating crazy. You brought back vivid memories. [ not the same end , but the same idea ] It is deep , very deep. You ...

Thank you for the incredibly warm welcome. I haven't really tried other genres, but I am always willing to experiment. @Calligraphy I have learnt to play the guitar on my ...

Wow.. I read it twice , and Wow. I really like the story and the atmosphere. The two lost souls getting together in the night when everything starts over. Good ...

It is a good poem. It just sent to in front of a girl and a guy, the guy forcing her to see him as he is. I hope this ...

It is just purely epic. It carries the emotion all through it, and even more it builds up as you read along. The scenery and atmosphere just carry you away ...

What I really like about this poem is that it deals with a very common guy problem. I don't think that a guy hasn't been in a situation like this. ...

I can really relate to this poem. I guess it is due to my internet connection which is as fast as the speed of a burnt out light. I just ...

Epic. I don't really care about technicalities [ not to say they are not important ] , I usually focus on message and felling. I red it once, nothing. Second ...

I love the idea you chose. I really haven't seen a lot of poetry written about keeping secrets. One thing I like is the fact that you touched a very ...