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Hy! I really like this poem, even though it is a wee bit abstract. The flow of it and word choice is really good. With those, you've created the scenery ...

This.. Is.. Epic.. Seriously, it is. I really love how the emotions seem to flow out. It is very dramatic and emotional. I absolutely love it. The word choice and ...

*fires up chainsaw* Hy! First of all , yeah , it did sound like a song. And without background music, you cannot really review lyrics to the max, but the ...

Taking out a few spelling and punctuation issues, the poem is quite good. You captured the scenery quite well, but still, I believe more can be done. You haven't really ...

Thank you very much for the reviews. This is my first short story in a while, so I am a little bit rusty.. I will rewrite it and hopefully something ...

He knocks on the door, anxiously, his sweat dripping on his forehead. He is angry, enraged! The only things he can think of are the things he will say to ...

Hy. Being a sketch and all, I can't really say much about it. I like the idea , and the expression on his face. You could work a little more ...

Hy. Wow. They are pretty good actually. First one is kind of abstract so I really cannot say anything but good job on it. The second one could use a ...

Hello. This is quite interesting. When I first started reading, I thought it would be just another rant on society, but I really liked how you wanted so startle emotions ...

Hy LifeTime, First of all , I personally like minimalistic writing, but maybe this is a bit too minimalistic. You evoked powerfull emotions really well, but you have just let ...

Hey Lil_Pau and Happy New Year to you too. First some structural changes. Winter laces the branches of the skinny, dry guardians along the dust and leaf-lined street; a gust ...

Very nice. I love it. The flow you established is great, I read it very easily. As in scenery , you've described it very well, inside and outside , very ...

It is good. The feelings it evokes are really strong , but are sometimes too mixed up , and I really can't make out what is really happening. The structure ...

I really like it. It didn't specifically bring up any feelings, but you've described the chaotic scenery and the atmosphere perfectly. I don't know about that coloured text or the ...

Thanks for that. The bag was there, so didn't have much to do about it. And yeah, those sparkly things do look great