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Meh.. Thought I'd drop by with some pictures of me. :) So.. Here I am. Happy Face on:

That was a loooong night. Just want to thank Scar for the epic battle for first place. Can't wait for the next Review Day.

Hy! Here to review a bit. One thing I noticed that the scenery you have created is amazing. I could see myself there, by the falls. I really love how ...

Hy. I'm going to review this today. General Idea I like it. I like the message it transmits; even though I don't understand some parts , I bet that they ...

Hello Verbena! Welcome to the place where writers and crazy people unite, YWS! I too really do not know how you could stay away from this site, but whatever, nice ...

Hello MaxCat! I'm your local Chainsaw guy. If you ever need anything saw'd off, just PM me. Kidding.. Why not tell us more about yourself? What genre do you like? ...

I like they way you rhymed this poem and the flow is good too. Ignoring some "oopsies" (xD) it is really good, the theme chosen being kind of , lets ...

I like it. I really do. Even though the structure is a bit odd, the scenery and emotions you've brung up are amazing. I love the way you've written it ...

Strange.. Really strange.. Guess that is why I like it. It is no ordinary poem , combining consumerism and death , which are two things I've never thought of using ...

Hy! First of all, congratulations on a good poem, but it could use some tweaking. The structure of it is good, taking things in steps , but you could have ...

I agree with idraax. The format is kind of interesting. But still , 'tis a great pair of lyrics. I like the message they send , and they would really ...

Even if it is short, it really expresses a lot. I love the way it slowly builds up tensions , and in the end “She’s not sore anymore.” . You ...

I really love the theme you've chosen. It is hard to write about life and it's ways, but you've managed quite well. Whenever I read it , I kind of ...

Hy! First, I just want to congratulate you on a very, VERY good poem. It is perfect in every way. The flow is good, the emotions are really well contured ...

Hy! I will review this poem , aparently. I like it, I really do , but I think the flow is kind of messed up due to all the full ...