RoarShark

On a late summer eve in the month of June, a man stood at the edge of the great White Cliffs of Dover. The sun hung over the land and ...

Thanks Carly! This was actually written as an assignment for school with a limited amount of words I could use, so that is why there is little dialogue and description ...

Quite interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next. You developed the main character really well. The only major thing I noticed was a in the third paragraph for ...

This sound like it could be interesting. I really need to read some of the story part to really be able to tell you how interesting it is. As for ...

I really really enjoyed reading this. I also really want to read more. It kept me hanging until the very end, and even then left me hanging. So I suggest ...

Not bad, this actually looks pretty good. The only thing you need to watch out for is making sure that your text doesn't blend into the image. You can do ...

I must say, that was incredibly engaging, and well written. The descriptions were vibrant and great, I could picture everything perfectly. I can also see many people relating to David's ...

I really like the overall premise of this. That being said your writing leaves me wanting more. The first thing I notice is that you move over everything very quickly ...

Well first off it doesn't seem like a cover to a book. Is this just the image you want on the cover? If this is a cover, it needs you ...

From Silence It all begins with darkness, from which silence is formed. The world lays still; nothing was visible. A path was drawn out of the darkness. It led towards ...

First off, Hi. Secondly, this piece is pretty good. It has a great deal of emotion in it which gives it an extra boost. I also loved the fact that ...

Hi! Obviously I am new to here, So I thought I'd introduce my self. My name is JD, and I am an avid writer, and enjoy writing a wide variety ...