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Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Hey there! Can you please review my novel: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer? Thanks ( There are 3 ( kind of ) chapters in total and I would like ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hey Skins, been a long time since I post this. So please review chapter 2 p. 2 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer. Thankies 8D
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Cassa-de review-ae
Heyy Apple :] Name: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer Genre: ... I can't figure it out so... Historical as some would see it? Link: - Ch. 1 Links to ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hey Pink! It's been, a long time? I guess lol. But can you review my chapter 2 P. 2 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer: Thanks :]
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch. 2 - P. 2
After many fail attempt of uploading this from Ted's internet, I finally got it! HAH! Take that TED!!! >8D I'm going back to past tense, screw this! :o The Bourreau ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Freya's Replacement (Episode 1)
It's best that you tell the character first instead of describing them during the scripts, you're not writing in story format right now. EXT. A STREET IN STOCKHOLM, WINTER. DAY ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch. 1 OLD
I'm having trouble on seeing how you guys see this as "rushed" because I do not see how it's rush. D: It seems perfectly fine to me!! Maybe because I'm ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Where do you get these amazing ideas ?
I get my ideas from dreams, history class ( I LOVE HISTORY!! ), a fork, a spoon, a spork! ... books, movies, games, and mostly anime. I get most of ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Codebreaker
Woo! Review time =w= First off, woah... you're only 8 years old? My goodness, when I was eight, I was barely learning English!! >_< Actually I did know some English, ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hey, I wonder if you can review my Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer. - Chapter 2 - Part 1 Thanks 8D P.S. I kind of revise it-- kind of. I ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)
Can you review my Chapter 2 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer. - Chapter 2 - Part 1 Thanks 8D P.S. I kind of revise it-- kind of. I ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hey, hey, hey Pink!!! Can you pwease review my Chapter 2 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer. - Chapter 2 - Part 1 Thanks 8D P.S. I kind of ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )
Hey, I wonder if you can review my Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer. - Chapter 1 - Chapter 2 - Part 1 It's kind of historic-ish ( I don't really ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: The Scars That Never Leaves [ REVISED ]
Revised :]
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch.2 - P. 1
I think this will be set in the French Third Republic ( Search it up ) time period. It's just that I will MAKE A LOT of changes lol. I ...
Oct 24, 2010