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Hello there Teardrop! I have a short story that would like to be reviewed: Thanks in a bunch ^o^

This is my first time doing a short story so I don't really know how to balance things out... heck I don't even know how to balance things out in ...

An abandoned prison gets kind of creepy especially when a psychopathic person lived there. I was making my personal poison , it was called insta kill. What I mixed was ...

:D Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it 8D

Are those two meerkats about to go surfing? WOOOOAAAHHH!! Anyway, please review my ch. 3 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer. Thanks :D

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I like it, a short prologue that can keep a reader wanting to read on. Now that's a prologue right there :] The character seems to be interesting. I can ...

Hello, I am going to review you for today. Since Shear already did the revising then I guess I don't have to... or maybe I'm just too lazy but anyway, ...

“Hey mister boss guy, I got your painting.” Said Ali. “Good. Give it to me.” Replied the man. “Here you go.” Said Ali as he gave the painting to the ...

Rated 16+ for violence, references to crime and minor language. All events depicted in this is purely fictional, any similarities to real life people or events are purely coincidental. Contains ...

Hey again Skins :D Can you review one of my other novel: 'Till we meet Again. Thanks 8d

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I was expecting this to be short so I could read it on my phone but instead I got this really long story. So I ended up reading on my ...

Oh my gosh, it's like totally sh- *punches self* There was nothing for me to nitpick so onward to the plot! It was very short, all I know from it ...

Hey Jash! Can you please review my chapter 2 p.2 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer? Thanks My death trap is finally gone :D ... Actually it just move ...