Roal

Hello there, the name's Roal, and I'll be tending to review your first chapter of Adiston Drive today. First of all, I don't detect any obvious grammatical error (or maybe ...

Hola! I would appreciate if you review me this story of mine. Empire - Ch. 1

Before I start, can I ask you something? Is this a children's book? It sounds like a book for children, a good old fairy tale parents would read to their ...

I'm actually thinking about changing the title, because I have no idea what I'm suppose to do for the title :P So a feedback and a title suggestion would be ...

Hey Aqua :D Can you review [part 1] of my short story? Thanks.

Heyyy :3 Can you pwease review mah short story? (p. 1)

Hey! Thanks for reviewing :3

Thanks Michelle =3= Mails isn't a word? MY COMPUTER LIED TO ME!! D;

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Hey Classy :3 Can you pwease review mah first chapter of The Bourreau and The Waltz Dancer? 8D This is the rewritten version. Thankies!

Hello! Roal is here to review :] What I thought was funny because I actually made a story about boxing too xD... well it's kind of MMA but yeah. RED ...

Hello there Michelle! I'm here to write stuff about your story :3 First off, put it in story mode, it'll make it better to read rather than it being to ...

Thanks for the review Skins! And that is the greatest review I've seen from a person: Iiscraftywriter lol

Hello there! Roal is here to do something! from the knife that we killed that hoe who was showing? If you're talking about the term "prostitute" then it should be ...

Heyyo! I'm here to write stuff 8D I watch a lot of anime so my artist inside me demands great picture, but I'll put that artist aside for now. Money ...