Roadnevertravelled

I think it needs the reality in the background. It gives you the feel that when they dance they enter a whole other world.

Florecent light bathing is HUGE

Oh, I didn't know. I really am new.

Poo! I wanted to win Next time my friend- next time. I mean I wanted to get the flag.

Interesting view on being schizophrenic- Much like how chinese and native americans would make myths on why there was winter or why there were mountains, stuff like that. Although I ...

Poo! I wanted to win :( Next time my friend- next time. REGAN-athena How. Could. I. Be. So. Stupid! Two mistakes in one game! I retired to my cabin in ...

“ We need a name for this place.” I said, looking out over the rocky hill to the empty road before us. He pauses for a moment to think before ...

REGAN-athena As if a simple rope could hold me to the ground. I turned, reaching into my pocket to grab the knife. As I sawed away at the rope, I ...

It's good-I liked the details you put into the first paragraph. It was going great, but I have some things to say about the murderer part. It was well written. ...

REGAN-athena When the old horse guy was talking about the rules, I was strategizing. Zeus would probably place the flag on Zeus's fist, It was obvious. I looked around at ...

I like it. Is he dead or something? That's my guess because the MC is all sad even though he should be coming home soon. The details in it were ...

I understand the first sentence, but it's a bit confusing, see if you can fix that. They where looking for a house .then they found one Wrong place for a ...

REGAN- athena I arrived at the camp around lunchtime. I watched the younger kids through food at each other and the older kids arm wrestle and make out. I highly ...

Hey, make room for my character! Name: Regan Perkins Age: 17 Parents: Sean Perkins, Athena Appearance: Regan is Irish. She is kind of tall, 5'10, with long brown hair, brown ...

Ice castle I live here In my castle of ice frozen, sparkling, ice. I do not feel the chill of ice just the warmth of being somewhere I love. The ...