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I agree with the two above me, it's a little to close. I think zooming out a little and cropping the picture so the ornament's taking up most of the ...

I'm not in this but. . . Each person reaped has to choose someone to go in. Other than themselves. To show how the rebels had to make choices that ...

ooooooooo I love the Hunger Games! There awesome. Name: Maple Bradbury Age: 17 Gender: Female District: 11 Appearance/Picture: images-2.jpeg She has fiery long red hair and blue-gray eyes. She's very ...

Reagan "Alright everyone, let's go get it. Nick, Spirit, you two should borrow some waiter costumes for us, were going in." Half an hour later we were equiped with seven ...

It's a piece with mystery, but possibly too much. It's also a bit bland. You never feel a connection to the man. Also, you say his eyes burn with anger, ...

Reagan- I sighed as I watched the fire. Three weeks here, and the days kept repeating themselves. Move, fire, sleep, move, fire, sleep. There wasn't anything else. Sometimes I wondered ...

Hi, hope I can still join. The title says accepting, sooo. . . NAME: Reagan Lynch GENDER: Female AGE:17 APPEARANCE: Long light brown hair that's wavy, 5"9, lightly tanned skin ...

Reagan I was so thrilled to be moving again. Now we could actually get something done. I looked in the rearview mirror around at our little group. Nick was congratulating ...

Reagan I slapped Jack on the back " Good job, that was awesome!" It almost hurt to say. I could have killed it. I had seen the perfect spot on ...

I'm not finished, but i'll post what I have later. it's later. ( I haven't had a chance to fix the errors from the reviews, so it's bad) A cold ...

1. I like it, but that can/robot part thing on the ground is kind of distraction. The colors are very interesting and you can almost feel the fabric. 2. It's ...

If anyone wants to kill it, they can in the next post.

Reagan We circled around the beast while it tried to attack us. More than once one of us would narrowly miss getting killed. Once in position, Nick yelled, " Now!" ...

Hi. Can you pretty pretty please review my story, My Hero? And if you can think of a better name for it, that would be awesome. Thanks!

Reagan " Jack, stop the bus!" I yelled. If something was attacking the bus, then we needed to attack it. I looked out the window to see a giant Minotaur ...