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Welcome to YWS! It's an awesome site that I've come to absolutely adore. Everyone here is friendly and helpful and if you ever need help or advice or a review ...

Warfare is all about proportionality and intent. The use of nuclear arms is only proportional in response to the use of nuclear arms and is paradoxical in nature. Nuclear (not ...

I'm actually a defence member home on leave over summer with not much to do during the days aside from going to the beach, so I'd love to read some ...

So, this is a piece I wrote for an upcoming drama assessment. It was to be in the Theatre of the Absurd Genre and was to centre around injustice. I ...

Haha, oh wow. The Alec Baldwin thing was totally unintentional. I have a teacher called Mr. Baldwin so I used his last name and threw the first name that came ...

Yeah a glossary might help for sure. Yeah that makes heaps of sense actually, and I think you could probably weave that description into the narrative somewhere. Keep up the ...

Sci-Fi Military writings? We could be best friends. I'm going to get right on this! After several weeks of continuous training, The Remaining Members of Training group B Were dispersed ...

I know I haven't critiqued since my last post, but I have been very busy with school work (I'm picking up Extension 2 English and Extension History, and this might ...

I must say I find it very hard to critique poetry, but I enjoyed this very much. Not often do I actually enjoy poetry, but I did enjoy this one. ...

Okay, thanks a tonne.

Sorry for the inconvienience but I posted the first chapter of my novel in the Action/Adventure Short Stories section. If someone could move it to Action/Adventure Novels that would be ...

Okay guys, firstly thankyou to those who critiqued my prologue. If you haven't read that, please do, but it isn't essential reading to understand anything that happens here. This is ...

Okay, I love me some war fiction, so I'll critique this! Red is for corrections/suggestions! The serene rigidity and straight edged silhouette of peaceful orderly life had been twisted into ...

The only thing I want to mention grammatically is that "it's" means "it is" and "its" is possessive, as in "it owns the car". Just watch that usage. I liked ...

Hey there guys, thanks so much for the critiques! I added an extra paragraph to this section which gives a little more information (but not too much!) No, this isn't ...