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When the old man does enough shining- a young lady, so black in her dress, covers my roof outside. Diamonds, or shiny things brightly dot her, circling and moving in ...

Surrealist? It didn't make sense, wouldn't the building explode if the kid lit up dynamite? Eh well, it was good but ambiguous. Elaborate! Write more, please!

I am one of the people in this poem, I just noticed that o.0 See if you can guess who... ----- All things are painted rainbow, though some might be ...

I had to finish Harrison Bergeson the story for civics. I tried to make it as short as possible because she said only write 1-2 pages. So here goes nothing. ...

8/10 perty and perty illegible

It is kinda vague, isn't it? Yeah it is about war (kinda forgot you guys didn't know lol) and I meant to keep it vague, but not as much so ...

Well at least he's carbon neutral negative, I don't expect him to move out of his fancy home. He's doing more good than bad, and that's all that really matters ...

In darkest night of silent fright the rockets glare to solemn whispers of beating hearts. In darkest night of ending fight the white swan sings to fading dreams of lifeless ...

Bob was stretching, he was stretching hard indeed. His manly-smelling feet were right above his head, waging war against the Febreeze a traitor shot, starting the Battle of Pilates Studio. ...

[I put this as a writing activity because I don't wanna judge/make a contest] I love Slaughterhouse-Five, even the autobiography poem Mr. Vonnegut wrote as an intro. What you guys ...

I do agree with Eragon, but I never read LOTR (for angry mobs, dial 1-800-TOO-BAD) so maybe my first impression of it was "cool". Eldest did get better though, and ...

It was well written but...bland. No funny. Satire is funny, you know like The Colbert Report where Stephen Colbert pretends to be a God-fearing Republican, but you get the picture ...

That's alright Via, already corrected it :) Well anyways thanks for the CC, it really helps me cause I'm new to the poetry business, I'm usually the one who babbles ...

Try suing Allah and proving a point on that. I dare you. Well I know nobody would because we have a double standard in a post-9/11 America :\

I'm kinda new at this poetry business, doing it for a contest (in real life, bother). Thanks for the CC, it really helps me (instead of just me guessing what ...