Riptide802

I enjoyed this story. Undoubtedly, it definitely has potential. The detail you have is amazing, specifically the way you describe the thoughts of your character and the scenary. All of ...

Hey! First off, I wanted to say that I enjoyed this story. The wording you used didn't make it hard for the reader to picture in his/her head. Overall, this ...

I thought this was a very captivating poem. The short style of it draws the reader in almost instantly, and the way it's present makes almost anyone relate to this ...

So, this poem just arrived in my mind randomly. I know that doesn't sound inspiring at all, but I was just at my computer and this is what flowed into ...

So, I'm a bit of a new writer here, and I just wanted to give you guys something by me so that we could get to know each other a ...

Wow, what an interesting story! I just wanted to say that I was drawn in straight from the start of this piece. I think you have great detail with the ...

Hey there! First off, I wanted to comment on the easy "flow" of your story. I'm a big fan of fantasy, and think you did a great job making the ...