Ringo_rules987

It's a nice poem, but it doesn't make too much of an impact. You need to clean up your grammar as the other posters have said. It flows well, though, ...

I Had a Dog I had a dog that gave me sweet life, But I had never once given it back. No sooner did I find it shot me. Then ...

I enjoyed reading this very much. I particularly enjoyed reading the line "God is angry, God is a fingernail". It's all very surreal, contemplative, and it flows together very nicely. ...

Urgh.. I don't know what I can add without simply repeating what the other posters here have already said. Anyway, it's a nice poem. Nice... just nice. I agree with ...

You have a good topic, but the rhyme scheme is so inconsistent... If you're going to rhyme, make a pattern. >_< I don't really feel that it's specific enough either, ...

The emotion was great, but the way you constructed it wasn't great. All the rhymes were just too forced. Just work on weaving stanzas together and you'll be great.

The emotion was great, but the way you constructed it wasn't great. Just work on weaving stanzas together and you'll be great.

I must be a noob because.. two reviews?

The words you chose were very exquisite and rich, and the rhyming was well done as well. The rhyme scheme you chose was reminiscent of an Italian sonnet. A,B,B,A. (Abba, ...

I'm not a love poet by nature, but I figured I'd give it a shot. This is what came out of me. Don't sugarcoat any comments please. Remind Me A ...

One of my friends informed me about this site and being a "hardcore" writer, I figured I'd join. =D