Ringo_rules987

I agree with Kylan that this is a unique concept, and even though I'm a bit against the concept of organized religion altogether, it makes for a good poem. However, ...

I can't say there was anything that.. I don't know, amazing about it. It wasn't as bad as many poems I've read on other forums, but you tell us everything, ...

Eep, well it's going to be odd critiquing an epic novelist, considering how low I am on the YWS food chain. But on to the poem... Well it's not bad, ...

I really didn't like much of anything about it, to be honest. First off, the title is a real clunker. It's not really anything imaginative, but I can see people ...

I do not hesitate to write something controversial. When I write, I want to make an impact. I wish I could write something that could change history, like Thomas Paine's ...

Leave Them Leave the messages on that recording loom. Let your lover’s yearning words collect dust in the neglect. Abandon them, and stay in your daydream place. Leave the poor ...

Normally I don't critique fiction, as my knowledge of the subject is not very extensive, but you had no comments! I had to give you something to think about. Unfortunately ...

You seem to stamp out these poems while putting little thought into them. You left nothing for us to think about, you just told us everything. A big part of ...

Well kris the intention of the poem was to make you think of how selfless you are and not make someone feel bad about how they way they act now. ...

Would You? Would you raise children of the Earth to nourish your starving enemies, and do so without scorn? Would you take a single vow of silence to become closer ...

Conceptually the poem was good. I can feel a certain amount of emotion, but not much when I put it in retrospect, so build on all of that. Like pieman ...

Sometimes more meaningful things can be said in a single word than in a novel several inches thick. I did really enjoy reading this, and the difficulty level of executing ...

If You Insist Give me a place of solitude; a place where I can think. Make a haven of agreement where eternal peace can be found. Make me a refuge ...

Anger is orange. It smells like smoke, choking and dry. It tastes like hot coal, burning and bitter. It sounds like a sonic boom, loud and deafening. And it feels ...

When writing narrative poetry, the rule about speaking to someone stays the same as writing a piece of fiction. I need you She said He said nothing But they both ...