Ringo_rules987

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It's rather complicated, to be honest, especially when making the spheres, it's difficult to explain. I'll try and make a visual guide, but you're going to have to try and ...

I recently did an optical art piece for some fun, and this is what I came up with. I used complimentary colors to highlight the main points of interest, the ...

I see you're fairly new, so welcome to YWS! Now onto the poem. I'll start with the first thing I saw about this poem, the title. It's a bit of ...

I really like this. It's a "journey" kind of a poem, and I think that fits well considering you threw in a driving theme. The first stanza was my favorite. ...

This was actually inspired by the Tony Bennett version of the song, I didn't actually know Green Day had done a version of the tune. But anyway, thank you.

A Road Without End I walk along the path of sorrow and the avenue of tears. Laced with ribbons of vitality, its stones don’t utter a sound. A street where ...

This is fine, I think you could improve it a bit however. First of all, you don't need to capitalize the first word of each line. Think of it like ...

I'm not entirely sure how to critique this. I can enjoy a short poem. Heck, Emily Dickinson fit in a ton of meaning in her poem "Fame is a Bee" ...

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In the photo I took, the ear was not apparent. I will do some touch-ups on this. Please note that I haven't touched this in six months and much of ...

I drew up a "picasso" half face and a shaded version of the other half of my face (even though it barely looks like me). I named it "Under My ...

This was very unrefined to me. Grammatically, you lacked punctuation and capitalization. You're a writer, proofread your work for punctuation, it's your responsibility. Your rhyming wasn't that great

It's decent, but I think it lacked a bit of an impact, I didn't feel much from it. Can you feel the currents blowing On top of the world? Motionless ...