Rincewind

I'm on it, do the same yourself. I think for some reason we practically wrote the same story, only different.

Poor Beeker, ever since his stint with the mafia hes been addicted to cocaine. Speach impediment my foot!

Agreed. It is indeed a combination of both. If you think about it , it's impossible not to do any pre-planning. Everything is planned in your hear more or less ...

Gonna try to write an improvisational story, section by section, periodically. Never ever done it before, so it should be interesting. Lets keep it set in the present. Foonkerpop. See. ...

- read the title backwards for a hint as to what the story is about - - rated R for language violence and gore. - The Dance of Death Step ...

Throughout history, Vendragons, commonly known as Not-dragons, were a widely discriminated race. For a large majority of their existence they were sold as weapons of war and tools of mass ...

Chapter I: Provisions – Fyrebrand the King of Vendragons (half man, half dragon) comes down from his keep and picks up armour and supplies for his journey. Bartender gives him ...

I'm going to correct your corrections. In case Yoshi is changing anythgin according to what you suggested. "The war began the Humans one therefore starting the time of Humanity." - ...

Shameless bump.

I want to come back as a Pogo Corn dog. I woud also like to be reincarnated as a tomato or blue crayon.

Aye, I'm just a little whippersnapper meself.

I was also going to ask about the third person thing. I guess everyones got their gimmick. Anyway congrats on all the accomplishments and yadda yadda.

You should probobly call it Grey. Or Grey Sunday Sea of Grey The Seaside The Grey That about all I got for now.

19. Making me the resident old fogey.

This is really good. I like the scene changes, its got good pacing and flow, and keeps you interested. Its sort of like a soap opera. Your dialogue is awesome ...