Rincewind

Holy crap this story is absolutely friggin fantastic. Awesome work hun. This story is my favourite thing I've read since I came to this site (sorry to say I've only ...

^Doesn't know that Jack Daniel's is WHISKEY, not beer.

Same said exactly what I was going to with one point. There is a bunch of wild stuff going on, and the characters whose percpective the entire story is in ...

I've never spent 40 dollars on seeing amovie 4 times. I've also never memorized a movies soundtrack before. That is unti l Charlie and the Chocolate factory came out.

Yeah it wasn't really intentional. I can't really say anything im writing on this story is intentional, hehe. But I'm not going back to change the periods, the essence of ...

Thanks TBR.

"Besides, Harry was miserable before everything went his way. This guy will be uncomfortable and everything is being twisted around and upside down. That is probably more for the second ...

You are a hundred percent correct. Its amazing what anothe persons point of view can reveal. I think I will change grainy orange horizon to brilliant yellow horizon. And as ...

Good suggestion. I normally dont neglect that aspect of a short scene. I was concentrating solely on the dialogue. I am going to update it soon. Thanks for reading.

-----Rated PG-13 for language ------- “There’s something wrong. Tell me. Caprice, you’ve got to. I can’t stand to see you like this.” He pulled her by her shirt sleeve so ...

At the end you wrote. "Who are you?" it asked me. Is that supposed to be the griffon talking? And why is the griffon like a wrestling referee? dont the ...

Good luck. If you think everyones gonna crit every paragraph of everything, this isnt the best place to come. You have to give it time and get people interested in ...

As soon as I saw those last two, i knew they were curtain-inspired! Nah, just jokin, but your pictures are fabulous.

Ohh haha. In that case your a shoo-in;) Good luck Inertia!

Right on man! Haha, man thats officially old-school. Do you have any of your other older LRPM work? I still have the comics I tried coloring in but failed miserably ...