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Re: Alone I need to be...
We all need time to heal When all are strength is gone We all need to feel Like our decisions aren’t wrong Nobody wants to be alone But alone I ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)
Love how the poem was told by the one who dies, it was kind of a very cool perspective. It seems like you put a lot of thought in the ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: The Final Dance
The first part of the poem I loved, but when you wrote about she needing to leave him and all that stuff below it just seemed a little off to ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: No title
I really liked the beginning of this poem, it was very capturing. I could feel the intensity of the situation depicted and I really liked it. Aside from the grammatical ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: Pain Forever Gone
As I read the poem it seemed very clear to me that it was written with a lot of feeling. I like the way it gave hope at the end; ...
Oct 31, 2009
