Rigel

I have to say, I laughed when I read I did kidnapped a child The rest of it had some good ideas, but a poem is not ideas typed into ...

It's hard to bash something with the good old g-word in it, but I agree with everyone else. Inspirational words are pointless if we don't know what we're being inspired ...

First off, I want to say that just because you say that something is confusing in the beginning, it doesn't make it any less confusing. Beyond that, it seems like ...

melody and harmony, warp and weft; waiting, just waiting I got chills when I read that. I'm a sucker for good alliteration. I normally shy away from formless poetry, but ...

This made me give a little giggle of joy, because I like the character of it so much. I love anything with a unique feel, and this is nothing if ...

Thank you! Those are my favorite parts too, actually.

Edit: Sorry, that came off unintentionally and uncharacteristically cold and hostile. What I meant was that I agree with Flemzo, and I think that more thought could have gone towards ...

This is better. That last little line has some power now, and the thing flows better as a whole. I'm not really into emo stuff, so I have to say ...

This reminds me of the World War II documentary that's on TV right now. I also like the last stanza. It seems reasonably pessimistic, but artistically understated. One teeny thing ...

I'm not sure about this one. I tried to give the words their own rhythm, and it might only be good if you hear someone read it, or if you ...

I had this lovely little "ahhh" moment right when I finished that. I want to go read a book now. On to the criticism. I am going to take a ...

It's like those Manhattan Diaries that they have on the second page of the New York Times, only much more subtly meaningful.

From your introduction, I could tell that you wanted to write a silly little poem, and by all means, you have succeeded. :D

How can I put this? There are other fish in the sea of blood and tears.

How about "Def to the Blind?"