Rigel

It might just be the title, but this reminds me of William Finn's song "The Games I Play" where he's comparing love to a chess game and saying a lot ...

I loved the line Consider me eccentric please. No one here knows me at all. I was confused by the rhyme-no rhyme at first, but now I like how it ...

That was awesome. I liked the abrupt ending; it felt appropriate. I am a huge fan of anybody who can rhyme and give the poem a good beat. It may ...

Ok, just putting this right here. The poem is about the Fibonacci Sequence. The Fibonacci Sequence is what you get if, starting with 1,0, you add each number with the ...

I dunno. I understood it fine without punctuation. Some of the rhymes were cliche or forced(So she never said it back/And her love for him he forever lacked), but I ...

I'm kidding. Read the subtitle. Then read it again.

I agree. Only wanting people who will give you a rave review to read your work is childish. The only way people will read your work is if they like ...

I like to think that I live in a bubble The set of all those disinterested With convivial sadness And rhyming strife Still, I hear the peals of nervous laughter ...

I definitely think that questions belong in poetry, answered or not. I do not think that that is the issue here. The issue is that all these questions have been ...

Or perhaps I'm missing the point entirely...

What you've done here is you've written a mediocre three-stanza poem and a great two-stanza poem. Repetition like this is bad (especially when you're rhyming two -ght words, which are ...

This was nice. It was short, but sweet. (chuckle) As always, there were a few little annoying things. "My heart felt like it would burst from my chest" is so ...

It would be better if you could say what the assignment is, but this seems like a rant more than a poem. Are you really trying to make us feel ...

Edit: A-HA! I finally get this! It took me a while, but I finally got what it means. This is nice. This is really good, or at least some parts ...

At first you were perfect An angel, descended from the heavens To guard my heart. But then I found you were tainted A daemon sent to tear my world apart. ...