Rigel

Fantastic! Sensational! It'll run for years! But seriously, it was good. There were a few places where the dialogue seemed unnatural, but hey, what other problems could there be? Also, ...

Slightly sideways out of synch I think I am, at least too much to notice We never come together Always Never at our common locus For very long I’ve waited ...

That was wonderful. There aren't too many good rhyming poems here, simply because so few people are able to write them. It wasn't cluttered, and you made the structure work ...

Nice. I like what you're saying here. The idea evolved as it went along, and it wasn't too mindlessly positive. A few notes: There's a few places in the beginning ...

wats a deep layered cuff? like his sleeve? lern2poetry plz. Putting that beside, I really liked this. I think that most of the things that could have been covered have ...

I personally think that it's too easy to just write about blood and dark and fire. And I mean just blood and dark and fire. You lose my respect when ...

Better! Much better. At least this time around it makes sense. I am not the biggest fan of this dark style, but that's me. I think it's making a mountain ...

Hated it. There are far too many poems about the exact same thing to make me like this. You're presenting something as dramatic that has already been presented too many ...

This was kind of cute. It had a glow, sort of an all-around happy feeling radiating from it. Glow is fine, I see why you liked it, but laser is ...

Forget serious. I giggled inside when I read this, which is so much better than giggling on the outside. Writing in netspeak has been done before, but i liked it. ...

I am done, Life has abandoned me. Now, I am alone. You don't need all of that. It's redundant. I think that "Now I am alone" would suffice as a ...

My first thought was an Ankh, but that didn't seem as epic as you intended. It has a very nice non-rhyming flow. I enjoyed reading it. It was fun. My ...

"I don't write to impress, Just to merely express; Like the orient. " I get it! But the reference doesn't make as much sense as you'd like it to. Ideas ...

Ah, poetry. Art with words. I love things like this that grab the English language by the tongue and pull as hard as they can. Brilliance is rare, but I ...

Ooh! I love riddles! Are you... A pyramid? (Hard to know what I think if I don't know what it's about, but I'm pretty sure I loved it)